Rummaging in the darkness to seek some light,
Fighting against the hollow weighing down my might.
Screaming in misery and pain day out and day in,
Cursing the loneliness that hideously crept in.
Having no one near by to return to – agonizing the core,
The grief of loosing the time that shall never restore.
Clashes inside the head and the loud cries of heart,
No one can listen and save this soul from tearing apart.
No friends to talk to, no one to care,
Wearing a fake smile when people stare.
The shredding of tears and the outbursts have cease,
The hollow grows bigger and takes over with ease.
Emotions die out and the zeal disappear,
The days feel gloomy and at night I fear.
When the night prolongs and the darkness daunts,
Its not the bogeyman but the loneliness that haunts.
There is only rage inside ready to erupt like a volcano,
Madness taking over control and creating a tornado.
With no smiles to follow and dry tears for sorrow,
What is happening inside by virtue of this hollow.
I want to laugh out loud and take my life back,
Break down these walls and play a symphony of happy track.
Need some light to fill in this dark deep hollow,
Else the soul may drown as the dark shall swallow.
Parth Agarwal
You do have an amazing talent ๐
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Hehe.. Thank you so much. I am so happy right now.. ๐ ๐
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Wonderful ๐
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Thank you โบ๏ธ
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Keep writing ๐
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I surely will.. thank you for the motivation. ๐ keep reading and keep writing as well.. ๐
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Itโs a beautiful piece. ๐
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Thank you ๐ I am so happy that you liked it ๐
Fingers crossed that u will like the others as well.. :)๐
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Hi:).. good acknowledgement that goodness can overcome the void.. blessings:)
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Thankyou. I hope you liked it and I hope you will like the others as well. Thank you ๐โบ๏ธ
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Gorgeous use of words. I must say you have an amazing talent. Keep writing.. ๐
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Thank you so much.. and so do you!! Your articles and wordplay was enthralling.. ๐
I hope you will read and like my future poems as well. ๐ thankyou for your motivation ๐ป
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Looking forward to more such good posts of yours. And thank you to you too for motivation. ๐
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Thank you and your welcome!! Cheersโ๏ธ๐
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Amazingly well written Parth ๐
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Thank you ๐๐
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I hope you will read the other poems also and share your feedback. Looking forward to it!๐๐ Thank you for your precious time. ๐
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Waoo. This is so beautifully written. I am loving it ๐
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Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it. ๐๐
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Hey Parth! This is such an intense poem. There’s so much depth in your words, and The way you’ve portrayed your thoughts is just perrrfect. It’s very relatable. Keep writing. ๐ธ
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words!๐๐ I will ๐ and I am so happy that you are liking my work!
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My latest one ๐๐
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
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Yess, I just finished reading and I must say, this girl is very difficult to find. ๐ Hope you’ll find her someday, haha. Anyways, I lovvved the poem very much!
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Hahahahahahahaaa!!! These are just feelings.. when the right girl comes, these will resonate.. as it is said, beauty lies in the eyes of beholder!!๐๐๐๐
Thank you for your blessings!๐๐
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Haha, yes yes. I agree. โบ
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hollow. i have been through this each line describes my life .
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Similar feelings and experiences haan;!! No worries.. there is always a silver lining!!๐๐ Lets hope we find it soon!๐ค๐
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Ah, those moments in the darkness have been crafted so well into poetry!
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Thank you so much!๐
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This is really thoughtful & meaningful and the concluding lines are just amazing.
“Need some light to fill in this dark deep hollow,
Else the soul may drown as the dark shall swallow”
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Thank you so much๐๐!! It was one hell of a time.. ๐๐
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Plz visit my blog as well and share your views.
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Right away mam!๐
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bedroom bickering about แดกhึ gets to go fiะณst.
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loved those lines! โค โค โค โค ๐
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Mai to apka fan hogaya.. itne saare lovely comments!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ Apne to saari padh daali๐
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ab aap itna accha likhte hain ki humaara dil hi nahi maana ki bina padhe chale jayein! ๐
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Uufff!!!โค๏ธ Iske Baad to hm hi Sharma Gye๐๐๐
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aap sharmate bhi hain? ๐
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Kyu nahi!! Ab aisi taareefein hongi to sharmana to laazmi hai ๐ ๐
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Thank you. Will surely do ๐๐ค
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