Walking under the moonlight I looked at the moon,
With a hope that I shall meet someone pretty, soon.
Hope to see a face that has a radiant glow,
And the eyes that can make the world go slow.
The delicate eyelids covering those precious gems,
Hiding inside them the depth from where the truth begins.
Dazzled and spellbound by the silvery shine,
For the teeth that sparkle with the smile so divine.
Make no haste although the winter may fall,
For her luxuriant hair are the source of warmth.
An aroma that can fill someone with joy and zeal,
Bestowing upon me her humbleness which none can steal.
The rosy lips or perhaps the lips of rose,
Garnishing over the yummy cake is a cherry nose.
The emptiness deep down is now ceasing to grow,
For the boulevard has finally begin to glow.
The face as white as snow with a tinge of crimson,
Wears the serenity of a sunset below horizon.
A smile so beautiful that no flower can match,
It comes with delicacy and makes my day in a snatch.
An enthralling gaze of those mesmerizing beautiful eyes,
And the miraculous blink makes my heart skip beat twice.
The golden voice always ring a welcome note,
The cuckoo bird envies of u for such a clean throat.
The moon is still there staring at the twinkling star,
But the moonlight found you adorned in the most beautiful avatar.
For no star can shine or twinkle as bright as you,
And no light can make the world sparkle the way you do.. š
Sometimes the beautiful nature nudges us in a world of fantasy. We then begin to dream of someone who not only matches the beauty of the nature but supercedes it. A spectacularly gorgeous person whose allure is gilded when juxtaposed to nature. I hope that the readers, through this poem, smile while reliving their fantasies.
This is truly beautiful ā¤ your descriptions make me feel like I am right there in the poem. Keep it up! Iām going to continue to read more.
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Thank you so much. I am really glad that you liked it. And I shall continue writing.. š
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Hello. Please check out my new poem whenever possible š
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
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This is so beautifully penned down. I totally loved it š
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I am glad you loved it.. thank you for giving it a read.. š
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It was worth it š
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lovely poem n lovely lines š —
Walking under the moonlight I looked at the moon,
With a hope that I shall meet someone pretty, soon.
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Thank you ! šš
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Welcome !!!
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So far my favorite ā¤ļøš
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Ohhhh!! Thank you so much.. šāŗļøāŗļø It is really inspiring
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Hello.
Please check out my new poem whenever possible š
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
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Iām on itš
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šš hope u like it!āļø
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Your writings are brilliant.. and the title of this poem is great.. good job
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Thank you so much!! āŗļøāŗļø Hope to continue writing and improve further. šš
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Sure.. waiting to see your brilliant post in future too
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Will be sharing one soon!!āļø
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Hello.
Please check out my new poem whenever possible š
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
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Wow.. This one is really good.. It brought me so many memories šš
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I am glad you liked it!!š Thanks for taking out your time. Enjoy reading!š
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My pleasure š
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Hello.
Please check out my new poem whenever possible š
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
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Sure I will!
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Its a beautiful poem š i like the way you describe each and everything . Really inspiring
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Hello.
Please check out my new poem whenever possible š
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
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OMG! š» I have no words, I seriously don’t. Nature poems always take my heart away. And this is just truuuuly magical. I’m not so good with words huh, there’s no word I know of, that perfectly describes how beautiful this poem is. A big Yayyyyyyy for this poem. š
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Thank you so much!!! Your words are truly inspiring.. you know how to pump people up.. Haan!!šš Feeling so motivated after reading your feedback. I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much… A big yaayyyy!!!š¤š¤š¤š
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Haha, your words are more inspiring. I loved your poems. āŗāŗ
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Yaaayyyyy!!! Thank you so much!!!!! I am so happy!!ššš
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Oh God. It’s so weird when someone uses the same words as me. Yayy yay yayy! I’m happy tooo. š¹
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Hahaha!! You find it weird.. I find it interesting.. ššš high 5!!
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I never let anyone use my favourite words in front of me! And this word is my top favourite. š But, you’re using it already. Toh abi I can’t do anything except feeling weirddd. High five huh! š
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Hahahahaahahaahahaa!!!!!š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£ššš I feel like teasing now!!! š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£ Yaaayyyyy!! So much fun!š¤£šš
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Huhhhhhh. š¼š¼
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š¾ Abi bohot saare comments hogaye yahan. Chalo write another poem, then I’ll review it. š¹
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Haha. Done! I am on it.. releasing soon!š
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You have natural talent for poems
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Thank you!š I hope I am able to improve further !š¤š¤
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You will!! I am pretty sure!!!
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Thank you so much!š¤ Fingers crossed!š
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Wowwwwwwww. ā„
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Beautifully penned. Mother Nature is a great muse. She can make us dream, write, dance, sing… she inspires all sorts of creativity… š
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So true!! She is the mother of all the creativity!!š
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Beautifully composed
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Thank you!š Will be sharing a new one shortly.. š
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What is life with no fantasy? We all love to dream, don’t we? Nice one buddy.
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Whether it’s a reverie or while sleeping, we are always in a dream.. And sometimes in real life, we work so hard to make those fantasies into a reality!! Hehe!
Thank you so much!š
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Yes we do. You are quite welcome.
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This is such a beautiful poem. š
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Thank you.. I am glad you liked itš
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you so much!š
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Amazing, it’s just beautiful.
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Thank you so much!š
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Your welcome
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Seriously spellbound!
It couldn’t have been more perfect!ā¤š
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Aww!! Thank you so much for such sweet words!!ššš
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That’s beautiful. It’s great that you make use of so many words and express well in long poems.
I loved it.
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Woww!! š Thank you so much for your appreciations and for liking my work!! I am so happy!!ššš
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Glad that i could make you happy.
Keep writing.
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Definitely!! And you too!!šš Loved your work as well and I m glad to follow you!š
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Iam so much into this ….loved it
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Thank you so much šš
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Your charmed words certainly brought a smile and caused some day dreams my friend. Thank you for such tenderness š
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Hey thank you so so much!!!ššš I am so happy that my work could send you in a reverie!!ššš Thank you for this wonderful comment!
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Thank you so much!!š¤š¤š¤š¤š¤š¤š¤ you are so sweet!ššš
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You are most welcome my dear.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you š
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You’re welcome!
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fantabulous! ā¤ ā¤ ā¤ ā¤
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