Jab tere shaher me raha karte the,
Hum bhi chup chaap jiya karte the.
Aankho me pyas hua karti thi,
Dil me toofaan utha karte the.
Log aate the shayeri sunne hamse,
Hum to faqat teri baat kiya karte the.
Hum tera naam lene ke khatir,
Ghar ki deewar sajaya karte the.
Ankho me nami kam na hojaye,
Hum roz tujhe yaad kia krte the.
Dard ye dil ka jb saha na jaye,
Tere husn ka deedar kia krte the.
Aaj teri tasveer dekhi to yaad aaya,
Kabhi hum bhi mohabbat kiya karte the.
English version –
When I lived in the city of yours,
I used to be very shy and quiet.
But my eyes were full of thirst,
and my heart housed storms of desire.
People came to listen and enjoy my poems,
Where I used to talk only about you.
Just to take your name on my lips,
I used to decorate the stage of my recital.
So that my eyes don’t get dried,
I used to reminisce you daily.
And when the pain in my heart intensified,
I used to contemplate your beauty.
And today when I saw that painting of yours,
I remembered that I was also a lover once.
Beautiful poem!
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Thankyou ππ
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Thank you for writing!
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Infact, thank you for reading!π
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You are still a lover. A lover of poetry. This is so beautiful I can’t express. π
I was waiting for your post and this was worth the wait β€
Good going Parth..!
tum lafzon mei alfaaz piroya karte the
hum chaand mei tumhara deedar kiya krte the
aj tumhari padhi toh jana yeh
yeh wahi hai jiska hum intzaar kia karte the π
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Are wah Sameera!! Kya baat!!πππ Itna pyaara comment.. Itni pyaari panktiyan!!ππ
Hum apse kuch sunne ke khatir hi likha karte the!!!
Thank you so much!! I am really glad that you liked it!!ππ I am so so happy ππ thank you.. u made my day!ππ
U have no idea how much it means to meππ
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and you have no idea how much in these past days i have smiled because of you .. π hamesha likhte rahiye , humei intzar rahega π
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Awwww!!!πππ Really!! Keep smiling re!!ππ
Haan bilkul… Hum likhenge! Likhti rahenge!ππ
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Double Awww…! π keep up the good work. π
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πͺπͺπͺβΊοΈβΊοΈ AAP bhi!!
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ji zarur Salman ji π with dolas π
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π€¦ye emoji use krna band krna pdega!
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* nazm padhi
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Beautiful beautiful!
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Thank you so much πππ
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Kya baat hain!
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Hehe!!ππ Thank you re!!ππ
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Always, re π
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ππ
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Nice!π
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Thank you π
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Wowβ¦
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Thank you!ππ
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Your poems always makes me smile π wonderful work π
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Yayy!!!πππ Smiling faces –check!!
Heheππ
Thank you so much!!π
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http://wordsshower.wordpress.com/
Do visit once… please
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I sure willπ
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Loved it. You’re a great writer, and the way you wrote, I could not help but comment on your post and tell you that it was amazing.
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Aww!! Thank you so much for your appreciation!! Means a lotππ glad you liked itπ
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This is so beautiful!
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Thank you so muchπ
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This is lovely….nicely expressed.
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Thank you ππ
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This is beautiful. Totally beautiful.
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Thank you so much!π
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“Kuch jyada na de paya ishq, bass ek sabak de gaya. Khaak hua hai insaan, Khaak se bane insaan k peeche ” amazingly done parth! π
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Oh my god!! Woowww!! Amazing lines!!πππ And thank you so muchππ
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A gentle read; you really tap into something with your writing. Very nice Parth!
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Yayyy!! I am so happy to hear this from you!!πππ Thank you so much!! I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart!π
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Hopefully not just the bottom of your heart, but all the chambers … valves and pink bits too haha!
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Absolutely!! Even From the deepest and smallest cell of my body!!ππ
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Awsomeeeeeeeee
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you’re a professional poet i must say!!! what a beautiful poem!!
loved it!! β€ β€ β€ β€ β€ π
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lovely……..made me emotional !!!
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Thank you π I am gladπ
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