In your face, I can feel the presence of God,
Lighting up the dark alleys with a heavenly smile so broad.
Even the black and white becomes colorful, with your touch.
To honour your spirit the alphabets aren’t much.
The zeal you possess and the grit that you attire,
Complemented by the unmatched beauty that everyone desire.
Under the hood of poise resides a tender heart,
Seeking the world to fathom its true serene part.
For the roses will wilt and the leaves will wither,
But thy beauty will be intact as the heavens never smither.
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Feelings are so strong that they can make a simple person appear like a God. In all their actions and in all their appearances, one can only experience the presence of God. It makes us realise the sheer and unlimited devotion and love we have in this limited space occupied by our body. That is when we realise that we are beyond this physical form.
Now, this is something heavenly. β€ we are all beyond our physical form. I loved the poetry as well as the thought you put up. π Lovely one Parth. Glad to see you back here π
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Thank you for such a lovely compliment!π€β€οΈ I was always here!π
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Han I know. Aur kahan jaoge tum π be here always
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Jee janab!π€π
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First line only took my heart away with flow. Lovely π
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Aww! β€οΈ Thank you so much!π
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Welcome! So much.ππ
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Hehe ππ
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Beautiful manππ
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome Parthπ
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The final words were amazing.
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Thank you so much π
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I found this classic, timeless! Your thoughts and wordsπ Parth.
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Are are!π Thank you so much!!π I am so glad!π
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This is so beautiful!
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Thank you so much. Glad u liked it!π Hope you like the other poems as well!π
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Haha I love them! π
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ππ€ couldn’t be happier!π
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Beautiful!
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Thank you ππ
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You’re welcomeπ
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Lovely poem! βΊ
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Thank you!π
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It’s purely beautiful. The words were ofcourse selective and the idea behind was really mesmerising β€
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Thank you for this beautiful compliment β€οΈ
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You are wonderfully well. π
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Haha!π I will accept it as well ππ€£π
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Haha, autocorrect.π
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Haha! Even autocorrect at times can tell the truth!πππ€£π
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Joking all right!ππ Have a nice day π€
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Yeah, yeah! You too have a nice day ahead.π
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This is so beautiful, they fill you with so many thoughts.
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I am glad it did!π€ Thank you!β€οΈ
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That’s beautifully captivating. I must say!
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Thank you so much. π
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Great π
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Thank you π
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I like the way you gave your own interpretation of your work π
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Thank you so much π glad you liked it
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They say that there are two kinds of writers: introverted writers and extroverts. Extroverted writers are those who love to explore and experience things out there in the world. That is how they create stories, they get it from the memories and experiences they gain. Ernest Hemingway is one of the best examples.
On the other end of he spectrum, are the introverted writers. Most of them have their own interpretation of the world and the things happening around. I love reading stories from introverted writers because they offer a different perspective about life.
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Hahahaa!! Such a polite way to say that I am an introverted writer ππ as a matter of fact, I am!πππ€ And I am really glad I could offer you my perspective. But I would definitely love to broaden my horizon one day. And contribute even more and better π€π€ π€
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You write wonderfully well*
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Thank you so much!β€οΈπ€
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Youβre most welcome.β€οΈ
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Great creation !
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Thank you π
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It’s a very lovely poem…
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Thank you so much!ππ
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Nice poemπ
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Thank you very much π
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This is amazing π
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Thank you Mamπ
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An awesome blog. So as the poetry. π
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Thank you so much!π Hope you enjoy reading the poems π€π
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Thank you so muchπ hope you enjoy reading the poems and sketches ππ€
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I love your blog therefore I nominate you for the versatile blogger award. Hope you accept it!
https://szwin.wordpress.com/2018/02/03/the-first-nomination-ever-versatile-blogger-award/
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Beautiful.
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Thank you ππ€
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Such delightful words from a dear man with a tender heart. You are something Parth β€
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Hey Diana.. thank you so much for your much awaited lovely comment π€π€ made me happy!π€
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Ta da! You are on my hit list my friend; it was just a matter of time. I was knocking on the door waiting for you to let me in πΉπ
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How sweet of u!!ππ My doors are always open for you π
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I shall bring my finest slippers! π·π
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Slippers?!!? To beat me up Haan?ππ ππππ€£
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Hilarious you are Parth! Yes someone told me you were misbehaving hehe π
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Me!!?? Misbehaving!ππππ No never. I swear! I am not a naughty person!πβ€οΈ
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Phew! You narrowly missed slipper slaps with your admission of innocence lol ππ
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Haha Diana.. u r damn cute!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ€ Your words are like those beautiful butterflies flirting with the flowers β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Wow! This comment is adorable …. Iβm blushing and laughing at the same time Mr Charming Agarwal! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Yesss!!!!! Mission accomplished!!!π¬π¬β€οΈπ My charm never fails ππ
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Smooth operator I salute you and announce the Prince Parth of Hearts hehe π
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Hahaha!! As long as it is your heartβ€οΈπ I am open to all accolades ππβ€οΈπ
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Well… all I can add is πβ£οΈβ£οΈ
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Those butterflies are growing stronger and stronger!β€οΈπ thank you Daina.. have a wonderful day!πβ€οΈ
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You too dear Parth! Spread your love and joy everywhere you go β₯οΈππ
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As you say maam!!π Aah! these kisses made my day!π β€οΈ
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Lovely and divine. π
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β€οΈthank you!β€οΈ
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awesome poetry! loved it to the core! π β€
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Thank you so muchβ€οΈ
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π π β€
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Loved your poetry..
You are really a wonderful poetβ€β€
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Thank you so much! It means a lot ππ€
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Lovely . Glad to see your thoughts weeved in poetry
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Thank you so much. I am happy that you liked it π€β€οΈ
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Most welcome π
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You have a way with your words, Parth. This is amazing! Aphrodite ki sehi zagah par pahuchaya hai tumhare lines ne! Love this! β€ β€
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Aahh!!ππππ Thank you so so much!πππ I am so damn happy!!!
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That makes me happy. π π π π And you’re welcome. π π π
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