Her eyes were scintillating with a vivid hope.
No matter the might of storm, she would cope.
Unfortunately for her, she was in a dark land,
The glimmer in eyes were the reflection of sand.
Sand that was thrown by him in those beautiful eyes.
Eyes that spoke the truth were blinded by lies.
Lies that he told without a modicum of guilt.
Guilt that could have saved the castle she built.
Castle that she believed was forged with love,
Turned into dust when she unearthed his bluff.
Bluffs that she hoped were a series of bad jokes,
What shattered all her dreams was a big hoax.
As she weeped, the tears carried away the hopes.
What remained was the sand that couldn’t go down the slopes.
And now the sand flows with her blood,
Tethered with lies she couldn’t escape the flood.
Drowning in his lies she decomposed into dust,
To turn into a pheonix and to defeat lust.
Well!! Probably my heart is very heavy that I have written something like this.. I can’t put words together to summarise this one.
I juat hope that you guys like it!!π
This happens to be the best post i came across.
The way you blend words with emotions, i fall in love each time π
This is magic π
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Thank you so much Yaar!!! ππ It means a lot.. π€©π such a comment!!πππππ
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This is beautiful, Parth. You did so wonderfully
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Thank You Nandita!! π Coming this from you means a lot!ππ
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Beautiful π β‘
Your post actually creating an imagination throu words π keep writing π
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Thank you so much Arooba πππ
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π my pleasure
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It’s okay! You write the most beautiful words composing a poem when you are heavy. And keep writing it pours heart out. A really beautiful poemπtrue poet!
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Thank you so much for these kind words πππππππ means a lot π
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Your welcome π
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I totally love this ππ
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Yaayyyy! Thank you so much π
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Great post, Parth! π
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Thank you Winnie π€π€π€
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You’re welcome, Parth! π
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