Your Eyes

When I look into your vehement eloquent eyes,
They talk to me and make me mesmerize.
How big can they grow and how deep do they go,
Everytime I gaze into them my heart and mind blow.

Sometimes I reckon if they have a world of their own,
Where you’re a princess seated on celestial throne.
The world having meadows full of scintillating flowers,
Where the nights are adorned by the rainbow coloured stars.

The crystal clear water runs along your castle,
And quotidian you thrive without any hassle.
The sparkling snowfalls that makes you smile,
The enticing fragrance of mud when it rains once a while.

The vibrant tinted trees are the reflection of your cheerful heart,
Where the rainbows gleam and that’s how your days start.
A world of dreams and desire to which you everyday retire,
Such lovely are your eyes that talk to me as I admire.

Just not those eyes which dream alike,
Even your eyebrows and eyelids get me out in one strike.
How alluring are those pretty eyelashes of yours,
Hitting me like a thunder, making me drop on all fours.

Those times when you blink and OMG your winks,
Every time my super strong ship of heart just sinks.
And when you are angry or want to do a sigh,
Girl you look so cute that my heartbeat goes high.

What a charm and what a dazzle your eyes possess,
Damn you are smoking hot with an elegant finesse.
All those unspoken stories that your eyes narrate to me,
Making me a part of the world that only you can see.

I fall deeper and deeper into your eyes’ unfathomable mystery,
Feeling blessed for being a part of such a vivid reverie.

Hope this poem made you remember those beautiful eyes you have fallen for at some point in time and have experienced something similar to this little creation of mine.

62 thoughts on “Your Eyes

  1. Ahaaan! Your poem created a beautiful image in my mind. Snowfalls, rainbows, stars, trees, flowers and all wonderful things one can imagine of, you’ve put them all together here. This is mesmerizing. πŸ’™

    And, the rhymes! I am surprised how perfectly you’ve rhymed every line of this poem. ☺ Loved this. Keep writing!

    -Firefly 🐝

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    1. Yaayyyy!! I am so happy!! Thank you so much for your inspiring and motivating feedback. I will surely keep writing.
      I hope you will like the other creations as well. Thank you so much πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‹πŸ˜πŸ€©

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      1. Haha, usually that *Yayyyy* is my reaction. But it’s the other way round here. πŸ˜› I’ll have to find another word now.

        Yippeee! πŸ™† I am happy too. I learnt so many new words through your poem. Thankyou to you too for that!

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      2. Hahaha!! No need to find another word.. let’s stick to yaayyyy!! Both of us!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Thanku for reading. the pleasure was all mine.. I m glad .. 🀩🀩

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  2. Woow! You are such a good writer! Keep it up. Looking forward to reading more posts from you! I’ll follow you and you can follow back. We can support each other on this blogging journey!

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    1. Yaayyyy!! Thank you so much!!😊😊
      You can read another poem, I haven’t written much.. but u can have a look! Hope u like them!😊 And yes I will!! Thank you so much!πŸ˜ƒ


    1. Heyyyy so true yaar!! So true!! And I love eyes!! I mean that’s a feature that can tell u so much if you can just read them.. i believe, if you are true to your heart than you can read all the eyes!! 😍😍😍


  3. You reach the core of your soul in your writings are raw, unfiltered and real. You have a way of expressing your thoughts with truth and honesty in your poetry. I admire your bravery. Highly recommended.

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